Crystal Shadow

Wow, I wish I could describe scenes like that. I really have to work on stuff like that. I find it hard to put everything I want in without ruining ...

I'm not to sure about this story or what it has to do with elements. I want to say I liked it but it's to early in the story to ...

Dark fantasy, assuming this is dark fantasy, is always the best. I think I posted on the first chapter, but I can't remember.... Oh well...

Good enough excuse for me. Ten words? Wait 'til you have to memorize half the dictionary for the SAT's. But still, it would mess me up, too.

My point exactly, you spelled it loin, not lion, and that's what got me confused. The wings, however, are new to me.

I think that she tied her story with the song/poem in the beginning (the 'remembering a lost romance from long ago' part might explain Lin's reactions to the unnamed man). ...

Thanks for explaining, and don't worry, I think I was just tired when I was reading it. The ending seemed a little blurry to me then, but now I re-read ...

All in all, this is a very good beginning. Thought out and very well written, but a silent exclamation? Do you mean a sigh? Because a silent exclamation makes no ...

True, I just want to know if she's referring to them as Archangels.

Hey, someone agrees with me! Cool! Yeah, you can tell I'm new... and tired... :lol:

My cousin would love this story, I think. I need to get her on this site. Well, I really can't find any flaws. That's a first.

I like it. You reffered to dragons a couple times, so I'm guessing this will have them included later? Besides the lack of vocabulary I'd say it's one of the ...